Q Reminisce - new video

By wmsproductions - 10-22-2011, 06:24 AM - Boxden > Video Drops

Q REMINISCE

[pic] Q REMINISCE Prod by WMS THE SULTAN - YouTube

let me know what you think

10-27-2011, 06:18 AM

I like that you started to use more enviorment images and they look good. However they feel disjointed from my perspective since the rapper are in a different location and even if he isn't, it feels like it.

The edit is decent the additional footage slows it down so it fits the tempo nicely. I think you have 1 close up shot that looks nice and the rest are half shots. I don't know if you felt it while you did the edit put cutting from half shot to half shot kind of messes with the momentum of the edit. And I don't think that is what you intended to do, because it feels odd in this video.

Now the composition are at times good but you also have a few where you drop the rule of thirds. I'm not saying you always have to follow it but to break it you have to really understand it first. You can always turn on grid in your camera.

Drop me a DM on Twitter if you want feedback during/before an edit instead of after the next time.

10-28-2011, 06:51 AM

Originally Posted by the danny

I like that you started to use more enviorment images and they look good. However they feel disjointed from my perspective since the rapper are in a different location and even if he isn't, it feels like it.

The edit is decent the additional footage slows it down so it fits the tempo nicely. I think you have 1 close up shot that looks nice and the rest are half shots. I don't know if you felt it while you did the edit put cutting from half shot to half shot kind of messes with the momentum of the edit. And I don't think that is what you intended to do, because it feels odd in this video.

Now the composition are at times good but you also have a few where you drop the rule of thirds. I'm not saying you always have to follow it but to break it you have to really understand it first. You can always turn on grid in your camera.

Drop me a DM on Twitter if you want feedback during/before an edit instead of after the next time.

Thanks as always for the feedback/knowledge. I am going to hit you up on twitter for some more insight

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