My First Shopped Logo

By Captain Planet - 07-20-2012, 07:36 PM - Boxden > The Gallery

My first time using Photoshop ever to make a cover/logo......I know it's not great & I got a lot to learn but I feel accomplished lol

07-20-2012, 11:45 PM

make your logo more visible....the high opacity makes it hidden in the texture. The text is also too close on the kearning, reads out more like nauti"boib". its also not centered. try and make the text and logo jump from the background. also align the bottom text some other way, like in a corner or something. the three on one line breaks symmetry, like, theres no center/spacing. Im not hating, its clean, i've seen WAY worse.

its all about composition. good work tho.

07-21-2012, 07:56 AM

Originally Posted by durag27

make your logo more visible....the high opacity makes it hidden in the texture. The text is also too close on the kearning, reads out more like nauti"boib". its also not centered. try and make the text and logo jump from the background. also align the bottom text some other way, like in a corner or something. the three on one line breaks symmetry, like, theres no center/spacing. Im not hating, its clean, i've seen WAY worse.

its all about composition. good work tho.

Thank you for the feedback bro. I never really notice the text being so close, maybe cause I kept looking at it & I know what it says lol. I don't know how to center a text & all that but thats on my list to learn. I think I know what you mean with symmetry, still working on these things.

I know you not hating lol I need tough "love" to learn.
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07-22-2012, 06:36 PM

just use the ruler. Play with the texts on different layers so you can situate them like so. Photoshop is a monster when you learn the ins and outs

07-23-2012, 08:15 AM

for a very first time this is actually good... I will never show my first work

07-23-2012, 10:17 PM

I like the simplicity of the idea but the font is wrong, the spacing is wrong, and the idea is wrong. Redo.

07-29-2012, 12:36 AM

Looks like miami kaos

07-29-2012, 12:37 AM

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