#Client Cover

All honest feed welcomed..

wheres his arms

Its just a draft..im still n the process of voming up with something to do to them..but how does the overtal cover luk?

needs more shoulders

besides the weird look of no sholders/arms the words are overall very hard to read.

Fade his body somewhat out then

Not enough arms.

Really fail to see the point of posting unfinished work when it's just a cover. I can see posting up a work in progress for a large project... but a cover?

im guessing he's at a design block and asking for inspiration, help or suggestions...

"TRAPPER" looks like "TRADDER" , and other that the arm/shoulder thing, i think its nice

shoulders can be blended smoothly into the background or have the newspaper clippings or whatever come in front of him on both sides...

also, trapper does look like tradder.

fix the artist name at the top, it took me about 5 minutes to find his name, or make it stand out more

if your going to keep the words over him, at least erase them over his sunglasses.. that doesn't look very good

also, and i see this on TONS of covers... fix the top intro title. it would be so and so PRESENT not PRESENTS.. PRESENTS is used ifyouu have one person doin the presenting..

that's all my criticism, otherwise.. it looks cool.