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| Still Messing With Photoshop! "Perfect Practice makes Perfect!" -Michael Jordan ![]() |
| 09-25-2010, 02:32 AM | away - #2 |
| I'm going to make a mental note to stop critiquing for you lames that keep posting your !! and won't participate on other people's ish. If we all acted the same way this place would be filled with work and no good advice for improvement. | |
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| 09-25-2010, 04:42 AM | away - #3 |
| The exekution is verygood but It looks a little cluttered. | |
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| 09-25-2010, 04:54 AM | away - #4 |
| Agree with KC92. The light streaks distract from the artist (which should be the focal point.) And the splatters and sprays seem a bit excessive. Tone that down, and I think you'll have yourself a solid piece :) | |
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| 09-25-2010, 05:50 PM | away - #5 |
| dont like the portrayal of the artist in this piece. kinda makes it look as if it doesnt focus on him whatsoever. Design is tight though. maybe try moving those two big light flares behind his head? | |
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| 09-25-2010, 08:55 PM | away - #6 |
| I also think that it seems a bit over done on the effects aspect, it looks like you experimented with so much that the artist and info got lost in the mix | |
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| 09-25-2010, 09:34 PM | away - #7 |
| ^^^ haha, right on the money! a very keen observation... actually thats 100% true. I downloaded a few new resources and then started messing with different resources, trying different things. Thanks for the feedback man! | |
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| 09-25-2010, 09:57 PM | away - #8 | |
you skipped that part in your reply.... i think its sick. | ||
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| 09-26-2010, 01:12 AM | away - #9 |
| Something about it is very visually appealing, my eyes love it! | |
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