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Non-existent

" Let me remain in my state of non-existence Where my shadow is transparent and my emotions hallow My physical being ... "

 
Non-existent

By Destiny1226 - 03-07-2009, 08:24 PM - The BX Book Stand and Literary Lounge


Let me remain in my state of non-existence
Where my shadow is transparent
and my emotions hallow

My physical being a simple decoy
pass right through me
like a blade through flesh

My thoughts are whistles against the wind
Morals are myths
Reality is non-existent


1 comments for "Non-existent"


 04-22-2009, 03:27 PMaway - #2
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this is deep.

seriously. I know that comment seems cliche, but I like where this poem went. I would have liked it to be a little longer, explore the subject more (only because I liked the viewpoint and tone), but this is good.

"My thoughts are whistles against the wind" - that line is tight.

nice work.
 
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