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saorio
04-14-2006, 12:53 PM
It's all over.
Do the right thing before it's too late.
You've been given favor and grace, so don't ruin it.
Use your knowledge, wisdom, and understanding for good.
Be different from the rest of them.
Be legendary, legendarily noble.
This is what will keep you.
Follow the 10 plus the 7.
The ten you should know.
Most of them start with "Thou shalt not."
The seven you may be a little less familiar with, so I will give you those.
They are love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, gentleness, and self-control.
The most important of these is love.
The other six revolve the one, so keep love on the tip of your tongue, in between your bitter and sour taste buds.
That way they won't be able to get the best of you.
Alright, I will be back soon to see how your doing.
Until then, Peace and Love.

Darkpoet
04-14-2006, 05:50 PM
Good and effective message. Well written and understandable.

Way to kick some knowledge.

9/10

pcmonk
04-14-2006, 07:44 PM
I also enjoyed your message.:afro:

PhrozenMenace
04-14-2006, 09:49 PM
tthat was coo

jumpman2304
04-15-2006, 01:33 PM
good stuff man...a real nice message

darquecinnamon
04-15-2006, 10:11 PM
i like:D

igotflavaa
04-15-2006, 10:38 PM
nicely written

gahotgirl79
04-15-2006, 11:11 PM
Nice.........

katastrophy
04-16-2006, 11:59 AM
Beautiful!

rasheedwallace
04-16-2006, 10:54 PM
with sh*t i got goin on these days...sh*t...this is a good message.

props.

keep it up.

JERSEYchick23
04-17-2006, 01:36 PM
I Liked It

Maaad Man
04-18-2006, 11:31 AM
Was real nice. I liked it. :)

True Geniu$
04-18-2006, 09:36 PM
nice message. i liked that piece. very nice piece pimpin...

Don Savant
04-22-2006, 12:31 PM
poetry is so good to me when there's a claer message written in the lines..makes it work reading...keep doin that.

jag1
04-28-2006, 02:15 PM
cool poem

PinkLemonade29
05-01-2006, 08:56 AM
very inspirational and uplifting. nice job

jag1
05-01-2006, 09:12 AM
i like......nice

ItsYaboyJay
05-22-2006, 01:42 PM
:snaps fingers:

ILLTECNIQUE
06-16-2006, 09:04 PM
real reconize real mad props on that

raymondfrdrck
06-16-2006, 10:56 PM
good cause i understood and it didin't leave me dumb founded

J Poet
06-17-2006, 10:21 PM
i had to read it a second time but the second time was worth it great drop

beantownbison
07-05-2006, 11:45 AM
I've been away for a while so i'm kinda late wit my input that u asked for but i'ma give it to u nonetheless. It was pretty good, I like the concept of the 7 wit 6 revoloving around the 1, it is the core man. Keep it up. I gave u props on it

willdolla
07-22-2006, 01:06 PM
nice i like the keep it on the tip of your tounge, right between your sweet and sour tastebuds

aplus
07-22-2006, 01:42 PM
like the spiritual message and the delivery of it...good poem

gangstakilla
07-22-2006, 02:13 PM
clean poem i liked it much props

Tooeasy
07-22-2006, 03:20 PM
nice flow of the messge is great

jimipurple
07-22-2006, 04:22 PM
i actually just wanted vice but I did enjoy your poem Uplifting

g.o.a.t91
04-03-2007, 05:07 PM
That was nice, loved the legendary to legendarily noble part, killer

catalytic1
04-04-2007, 12:16 AM
Props.