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aplus
04-11-2006, 03:46 PM
http://slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=659300

This is a tribute piece I wrote about Richard Pryor (R.I.P.) ...one of the funniest black comedians ever. I rented his concert movie "Live on the Sunset Strip" last weekend - his first concert after he had almost killed himself OD-ing on crack - and it brought me to write this...hate it or love it...but please drop some feedback...-A+




Live on the Sunset Strip
for Richard Pryor (1940-2005)

Only a special caliber of man
can muster up the courage
to use performance as a confessional,
to rise from rehab, third-degree burns and freebase ashes
and masterfully spin anguish into laughter,
to get onstage and show everyone
that humor exists within taboo subjects,
personal tragedies included.

Here you stand before the world
holding all your baggage,
red tuxedo glowing,
puffy Afro glistening,
speaking honestly with your trademark
crooked smile and open heart.
As raw as you can be, your tirades
and punch-lines are expletive-filled
only because the human truths you are relating
demand every sh*t fu*k bi*ch
that shoots from your mouth
during this vulgar monologue.

While you expertly convey
the inner pain and private demons
that haunt your tumultuous life
you deliver a memorable message.
It came from a spiritually renewing trip
to Africa, when you escaped the poisonous
American atmosphere saturated with prejudice
just long enough to take a clear look at it.
You explain that while in the motherland,
a voice inside spoke to you
and made you reassess your usage
of the word n i g g e r.

You publicly renounce this racial epithet
that you’ve spent a decade repeating,
your revelation pushing you
to stop misusing it cold turkey,
as if to cure your longtime habit of saying it.
It speaks volumes to hear you, a man
who practically patented the pimping
of the N-word for comedic purposes
swear your abandonment of this word
for a higher moral cause.

During your intimate soliloquy,
through simple revelations disguised as jokes,
you taught people
the influence of a hurtful word such as n i g g e r
comes not from our intentions,
or its definition,
or from its use or abuse,
but from an understanding
that its power can be felt most
when we decide to never say it again.

preshrunkmilk
04-11-2006, 05:59 PM
As raw as you can be, your tirades
and punch-lines are expletive-filled
only because the human truths you are relating
demand every sh*t fu*k bi*ch
that shoots from your mouth

^^thats hot right there.......I've been waiting for you to drop anther one, like the others this is great. I myself not to young to nnot have grown up with the man, but to young to understand the patch he blazed till i reached college that is. this is a great tribute piece to him, knowing what i do now....

Throughout this vereus you comainded respect for him while bringing out the content in his acts, and that he wanted those to walk away with.....the end of this poem
the influence of a hurtful word such as n i g g e r
comes not from our intentions,
or its definition,
or from its use or abuse,
but from an understanding
that its power can be felt most
when we decide to never say it again.
IS great..........once agien man you have made me and anyone who reads this have to step up there game......I give it an A+

foxylady06
04-12-2006, 01:15 AM
wow, this is damn good boy, i'm sure he would be honored just as much as i'm honored to just be reading it. i loved every word. one of the things that really jumped out at me was your description of his drug use
and of course the use of the N word. it was educational for those who didn't know much about him, and emotional for those who can relate to his struggle. real nice read very nice:)

Darkpoet
04-12-2006, 02:42 PM
Lost for words, like always this is A-plus work. It was so naturally flowing, and the poetic genuis of the content was deep. It's hard to write poety on tributes, but you did a hell of a job.

10/10

~BLUEPRINT~
04-13-2006, 07:59 AM
Amazing....you write so brilliantly fam....damn that book needs to drop...im gonna help put you on the map fam....

aplus
04-13-2006, 09:02 AM
thanks for the positive feedback...

aplus
04-14-2006, 10:53 AM
uppin

*LEGEND*
04-14-2006, 09:16 PM
damn that sh*t was fiyah. descriptive as hell and the wordplay was off the chain.
u someone i look up to in this poetry sh*t...on the real fam

when does that book drop?

True Geniu$
04-14-2006, 10:30 PM
aplus, this is classic homie. i got that movie. this piece makes me want to go watch it tonight. very nice tribute to one of the very best comedians ever. the last stanza can make people turn their whole vocab around. classic...

aplus
04-15-2006, 10:15 AM
thanks genius and legend, glad u are feelin this drop

and legend, my book will be out this year...just working sh*t out with my publisher, but I know it is going to be out this year because I am a major part of their marketing efforts...I just have to learn to be patient...I am just writing as much as I can so I can have a second book ready if (when) the first book blows up...

jag1
05-02-2006, 12:07 PM
nice drop.......

aplus
11-28-2006, 02:07 PM
uppin...seems relevant after the whole KKKramer incident

missangel222003
11-28-2006, 09:07 PM
You did your thing with this one. Very nice tribute. Keep writing...