Dove Luv J.R.
03-08-2006, 08:22 AM
This is the first piece I posted here it got slept on i guess its kinda long, but I found some audio to it and decided to put it up again. Jus something different I guess.
Audio: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=501690
Life’s a nightmare, I dream about death, at times I get up//
Cold sweat like damn my time might be up//
Its prolly the wine or the dutch,// but sometimes I pray my eyes a get touched//
Closed to sleep forever, but then its Isiahm get up//
I cry rivers, but my thoughts stay afloat//
So amazing, a boat,// that’ll never rock, forever it’ll float//
So I try to drown it in some waves that I wrote//
Beg for mercy in the way that I wrote// you had to hear, I thought you’d be glad to hear//
Or did my sh*t stray a note// Is my voice not loud//
I know, of my choices you not proud// but please take this black cloud//
Please take this black child// away from the storm//
Away from this cold, torn--// world that I live in//
I swear I’m not living// I walk around deceased its so livid//
The pain, the hurt, the rain it’s so livid// here reach, you can feel it//
Fallin from my eyes ten fold you can feel it// but I fear you can’t heal it//
So I’ll seal it// no need for us to face hell together//
No matter how well the weather// feel my forecast is hell forever//
My life stale forever// why can’t they sell me better//
fu*k tryin to tell me better// like we cant beat hell, do well together//
Why not leave well enough alone// u took my mom like I’m well enough alone//
I’m not, I’ve had hell enough alone//
I take that back I jus wanna hold her hand//
Even more I jus want to hold your hand// but I can’t, I don’t know this man//
On top of that I feel I sold this man// Promises I never had intent on keeping// Like I never had intent on sleeping//- -
Peacefully, ever again, forever had intent on weeping//
Mama I know you sick// but I feel like he don’t owe me sh*t//
How can he know me, sh*t// I don’t know myself//
How can he own me, sh*t// I own myself//
Nobody was here, I’ve grown myself//
Sometimes I feel I’ve outgrown myself//
Like who am I?, I’ve never known myself//
Plus I’m not performing according to his will//
So rain gray skies according to his will//
His enemy’s a liar, I’m cohorting with him still//
Honestly I’m afraid to embrace you// cuz I feel if I face you//
You’d know I’ve disgraced you// left and misplaced you//
And never thought of looking for you,//
But now I feel my life fading, and I’m here looking for you//
Now you won’t answer, you’ll turn me away//
like he’s not sincere he’ll change in a turn of a day//
but I promise If you turn me today// jus turn me the way//
turn me and say// this is life you can have it//
see the light you can have it// no longer your life is no habit//
I’ll never leave, deceive you// instead I’ll see, receive you//
PLEASE I’M BEGGING YOU, I LOVE I YOU, I NEED YOU
http://www.slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=637476
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Audio: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=501690
Life’s a nightmare, I dream about death, at times I get up//
Cold sweat like damn my time might be up//
Its prolly the wine or the dutch,// but sometimes I pray my eyes a get touched//
Closed to sleep forever, but then its Isiahm get up//
I cry rivers, but my thoughts stay afloat//
So amazing, a boat,// that’ll never rock, forever it’ll float//
So I try to drown it in some waves that I wrote//
Beg for mercy in the way that I wrote// you had to hear, I thought you’d be glad to hear//
Or did my sh*t stray a note// Is my voice not loud//
I know, of my choices you not proud// but please take this black cloud//
Please take this black child// away from the storm//
Away from this cold, torn--// world that I live in//
I swear I’m not living// I walk around deceased its so livid//
The pain, the hurt, the rain it’s so livid// here reach, you can feel it//
Fallin from my eyes ten fold you can feel it// but I fear you can’t heal it//
So I’ll seal it// no need for us to face hell together//
No matter how well the weather// feel my forecast is hell forever//
My life stale forever// why can’t they sell me better//
fu*k tryin to tell me better// like we cant beat hell, do well together//
Why not leave well enough alone// u took my mom like I’m well enough alone//
I’m not, I’ve had hell enough alone//
I take that back I jus wanna hold her hand//
Even more I jus want to hold your hand// but I can’t, I don’t know this man//
On top of that I feel I sold this man// Promises I never had intent on keeping// Like I never had intent on sleeping//- -
Peacefully, ever again, forever had intent on weeping//
Mama I know you sick// but I feel like he don’t owe me sh*t//
How can he know me, sh*t// I don’t know myself//
How can he own me, sh*t// I own myself//
Nobody was here, I’ve grown myself//
Sometimes I feel I’ve outgrown myself//
Like who am I?, I’ve never known myself//
Plus I’m not performing according to his will//
So rain gray skies according to his will//
His enemy’s a liar, I’m cohorting with him still//
Honestly I’m afraid to embrace you// cuz I feel if I face you//
You’d know I’ve disgraced you// left and misplaced you//
And never thought of looking for you,//
But now I feel my life fading, and I’m here looking for you//
Now you won’t answer, you’ll turn me away//
like he’s not sincere he’ll change in a turn of a day//
but I promise If you turn me today// jus turn me the way//
turn me and say// this is life you can have it//
see the light you can have it// no longer your life is no habit//
I’ll never leave, deceive you// instead I’ll see, receive you//
PLEASE I’M BEGGING YOU, I LOVE I YOU, I NEED YOU
http://www.slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=637476
feed and or critique appreciated 1