Read Me

[Don Savant]

Read Me

read me
like the book i am
front to back
cover to cover
over and over
until you get me
until you understand fully
what exactly i mean
where i come from
my beginning
my middle
and my end
then read me again
watch as my plot thickens
and i twist and turn
leaving you confused where you stand
yet with a yearning to learn
to find out more
of what i have to offer
each chapter runs deep
my title is eye-catching
either you'll cry
or i'll have you dying laughing
my ups and my downs
are truly captivating
though i may be mainstream
it's still up for debating
with each page there's a story
much to behold in my lines
so becareful, skip nothing
as i slowly
blow your mind



penned bout 5 minutes ago

[Def Poet]

that was hot fam keep droppin ish like that

[cyberwulf]

you got a style that i haven't seen before..it brings new light i guess, nice sh*t keep up

[SuNsHiNe_BLuE]

bwoyyyyyyyyyyyy this is hot...nice drop...1

[Don Savant]

thanks again ayo...that really means a lot to me coming from you....

[aplus]

yeah, that is hot, good drop....cool concept with this poem

btw, your micheal jackson avy is kinda creepy...

[Don Savant]

thanks aplus....thanks everybody....and what michael jackson avy?

[Don Savant]

can i get some more feedback?

[hiphophoney]

nice i can just imagine reading u lol-propz for your bars

[Don Savant]

thanks honey

[Don Savant]

more crits

[Don Savant]

uppin

[Don Savant]

ya'll know

[brodch01]

that sh*t was tight. "watch as my plot thickens/ as i twist and i turn" hot line

[*LEGEND*]

My bad... Yo sh*t was hot dawg. Good sh*t. But if it was ME i would have saved it for POM or open mic

[Don Savant]

just seein if i can get a few more peeps to come through and crit...