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Don Savant
07-29-2004, 10:59 PM
Read Me

read me
like the book i am
front to back
cover to cover
over and over
until you get me
until you understand fully
what exactly i mean
where i come from
my beginning
my middle
and my end
then read me again
watch as my plot thickens
and i twist and turn
leaving you confused where you stand
yet with a yearning to learn
to find out more
of what i have to offer
each chapter runs deep
my title is eye-catching
either you'll cry
or i'll have you dying laughing
my ups and my downs
are truly captivating
though i may be mainstream
it's still up for debating
with each page there's a story
much to behold in my lines
so becareful, skip nothing
as i slowly
blow your mind



penned bout 5 minutes ago

Def Poet
07-30-2004, 12:43 AM
that was hot fam keep droppin ish like that

cyberwulf
07-30-2004, 01:31 AM
you got a style that i haven't seen before..it brings new light i guess, nice sh*t keep up

SuNsHiNe_BLuE
07-30-2004, 09:31 AM
bwoyyyyyyyyyyyy this is hot...nice drop...1

Don Savant
07-30-2004, 11:55 AM
thanks again ayo...that really means a lot to me coming from you....

aplus
07-30-2004, 12:35 PM
yeah, that is hot, good drop....cool concept with this poem

btw, your micheal jackson avy is kinda creepy...

Don Savant
07-30-2004, 01:06 PM
thanks aplus....thanks everybody....and what michael jackson avy?

Don Savant
08-02-2004, 11:09 PM
can i get some more feedback?

hiphophoney
08-04-2004, 04:46 PM
nice i can just imagine reading u lol-propz for your bars

Don Savant
08-04-2004, 07:52 PM
thanks honey

Don Savant
08-14-2004, 09:44 AM
more crits

Don Savant
08-20-2004, 01:31 AM
uppin

Don Savant
08-20-2004, 01:19 PM
ya'll know

brodch01
08-20-2004, 05:16 PM
that sh*t was tight. "watch as my plot thickens/ as i twist and i turn" hot line

*LEGEND*
08-22-2004, 02:45 PM
My bad... Yo sh*t was hot dawg. Good sh*t. But if it was ME i would have saved it for POM or open mic

Don Savant
10-07-2004, 12:34 AM
just seein if i can get a few more peeps to come through and crit...