hate life!

[hiphophoney]

rite at a point in my life rite now where sh*ts gettin too much well when i get like dis i put pen to paper


hate life

If i was to take my life today
maybe all the pain i feel would go away
before i think of doin this sh*t
who out there would i truly miss
if i look inside my heart
the ones i would truly miss r my dawgs
fu*k family they dont care for you
just put u down sted tryna help u
partly cause of them y i feel this way
life after death....lets hope so hey
so now my world is gradually turnin grey
dont wanna do nuthin
like dialated people say "cant live my life this way"
fu*k it whats the point of living another day
what is there for me in this world
billions of people just annoy me oh well
maybe its time to leave this world
run the bath waters warm
shall i add bubbles nah no one will tell
lock the door
strip from my clothes
put one foot in
slip into the water
everything is so silent and still
except for the drip of water i can feel
drippin on my leg from the tap
soon that will be blood on the bathroom mat
lay here in silence
my mind is blank
look at the shelf
could all end in a flash
pick up the blade thats in my sights
tilt my head back and look toward the light
maybe god can forgive me for what ive done
whats this flashing in my mind me at 4,10, 19 now its gone
now everythings gone black......
dark and cold here
can't find my way back

[n1xyy]

tight sh*t right ther

[Don Savant]

that's deep lady...hopefully you'll remember that trouble don't last always.....and if it doesn't kill you it makes you stronger...just hold on...it'll all get better and you'll rise from it all a better person.....ya'll come on through and put ya votes in for the poet of the moment....

[cyberwulf]

sh*t nice poem real emotional tip you had keep up babes

[CHEA CHEA]

thats my girl rite thurr!

*applause*

[Def Poet]

yes real nice drop. i felt the emotion, and just hold your head to the sky ma

[*LEGEND*]

Damn Ma that was strait from the heart. Good drop. Props on this and keep ya head up. Dont let life get u down cuz u WILL get thru it and everything will be better. Stormy weather dont last forever and everything happens for a reason. Dont give up...thanx for droppin some heat in our poetry section

[aplus]

very emotional - hopefully writing this will help you get though whatever BS you are facing...keep ya head up...

[Gold~Ringz]

rah,all i can say is that sh*t was real....
props

[diamond diva]

Aye Fire Poem Good Drop Keep It Up

[LiquidSwordz]

<-----sheds a tear....(sarcastic)......i think someone needs a hug *no homo*

fall back or get leaned back......ya dig?

GIVE ME PROPS *no hu hu hu hu homo*

jim jones august 24th

[brodch01]

that sh*t was fire, and it felt real cuz it put me right there with you

[~BLUEPRINT~]

DAMN!!!!! I cant believe I didnt peep this...this was str8 hotness right here....damn ma...u brought it....stay up....1