Life

[mygangstalean]

so many senseless acts
wars,not caring for the poor
and theres still much more
the abuse of women
the abuse of children
in some ways
violence is like aids
no cure
so we must endure,these times
and hope they turn into something pure
im not a preacher
but i do wanna teach
and hopefully reach ya
there are four types of life
there are two kinds of rich
and two kinds of poor
one type of rich is bieng born rich
the other is working for it
one type of poor is bieng born poor
the other is never working for sh*t

im just one person
so my opinions dont matter
but together,as a people
we can achieve anything
throughout all the grief that you have seen
to make it go away you know what you can do?
Nothing
just keep ya head up
never die in this never endin cycle
till God says its your time

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good message, I like the subject matter, and you are saying something of value

maybe make it a little more "poetic" instead of preachy (despire your like that says your are not a preacher, it kinda comes off that way), if you know what I mean - that might improve it a little.

but as for what you have wrote here...it is real talk.

[aplus]

damn, homie has a lot of prep h in his pockets

[~BLUEPRINT~]

I Propped Him To Help Him Out

[aplus]

damn, a prop from blue can put a playa on easy street...