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SuNsHiNe_BLuE
02-28-2005, 09:03 PM
http://slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?p=1697643&posted=1#post1697643

This isn't new and some of yall may have seen this one before but we got a lot of new peeps and i want some crits on this...my fam too...blue, savant, aplus, playboy....

they say
hindsight
is 20/20
and today
this very moment
i accept
his presence
his light
his space

i traveled roads
and
i had angels
watching over me
i saw god in my rearview mirror

i looked back
i saw signs
but was blind
to their message
thinking
their messages
were blind
to me

i maintain
god is in
everyone
everywhere
every minute of
every hour of
every day

i saw god
in those i love
in their eyes
and souls

i saw god
in those i despise
through their
darkness
was the light

and i saw god
in the mirror
staring at me
with my own eyes
i even saw god
in you

grace sometimes
hurts
unknowingly
unwittingly
for his lessons
are painful
as are they also
beautiful
we need not have
rose-colored glasses
to see
the truth

though i strongly oppose
man-made
religion
and though i oppose
its principles
so-called moral standards
holier-NOT-than-thou
fakin the funk religions
those who told me
...and i quote...
"...dont bother praying...
unless u are saved;
god will not
hear
your prayers..."

though i am in
strict
opposition
i offer my support
to the truth
to the light
and the love
and the everlasting

i believe in god
and god believes in me

~BLUEPRINT~
02-28-2005, 09:34 PM
was hot when i first read it and its still hot now!! Where you been ma? We missin you round here....

Ju$tin15
02-28-2005, 09:57 PM
excellent poem. its very artistic. i can really see your belief in God as i read this poem. there are a lot of people who believe in God, but dont acknowledge it and i commend u 4 acknowledging your belief in God.

deltamae
03-01-2005, 12:01 AM
Greatness...

SuNsHiNe_BLuE
03-01-2005, 09:25 AM
thx...UUUUPPPPPPPPP

brodch01
03-01-2005, 09:35 AM
love your drops, but this wasnt my favorite of yours... nevertheless i like the end, and the message is real and strong... "as are they also," not sure this works...

aplus
03-01-2005, 09:54 AM
hotness b4, hotness now....the title is sick, would draw even a non-religious reader in to at least peep it...

Don Savant
03-01-2005, 12:17 PM
you already know...said it was hot before...still hot now....

Iceman46ct
03-07-2005, 12:01 PM
nice... spoken with a strong realness

TheOneTheOnly
04-05-2005, 05:17 PM
powerful eccentric piece ma

aplus
04-09-2005, 09:24 AM
still sick...I happened to read it again today...this might be my fav of yours, at least in terms of originality