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~BLUEPRINT~
01-27-2005, 05:16 PM
http://slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=166619

Ignorance is Bliss

Every dawn,

My wing tipped shoes knock against the dew saturated concrete

Suitcase beared in grasp

I remain systematic in my routines,

In this political shaped, economic fed world,

Yet, I allow myself to experience this soothing harmonic echoing

Coming from a few blocks down.



His rusted saxophone yawns the same tunes,

With a few scattered coins rested at his feet.

His stale gray hair warrants ring worms

And his jagged beard yearns for a clean shave

But his harmonic array illustrates

A happiness his unsanitary demeanor couldn’t portray.



Planted above the cracked cement

He stands prominent in his rugged attire

Relaying a symphony the passing corporate America is oblivious to

And business moguls shun him with ignorance

Illustrating their true colors.

Yet, he continues to wail illustrious notes

Even though some may not comprehend

The meaning behind his orchestrated jazz,

His fingers drum notes along this instrument

With the same motivation that contrives him

To amplify such beautiful noise

Everyday.



He remains driven by this God given talent,

As his soulful breaths bring life to the

Contemporary, traditional ignorant traffic horns

Drowned by the cell phone riddled environment.

Even still he isolates his mind from the current state

And indulges in his horn.



So I continue my restless pursuit to work every morning

And confide in this arresting sound

As he doesn’t ask for money

But accepts the scant donations that sit uncollected

Because his heart doesn’t prize on money,

For his only love resides in MUSIC…….

deltamae
01-27-2005, 05:46 PM
Love da imagery

SuNsHiNe_BLuE
01-27-2005, 07:22 PM
this was pretty good to me...certainly not one of your best, it didnt bring forth the feeling that your work usually does, but it was a good piece nonetheless...6/10

Def Poet
01-27-2005, 07:58 PM
Yeah i agree with ayo on this, it's a good piece, but it just felt empty in a sense, no feeling

~BLUEPRINT~
01-27-2005, 08:43 PM
ouch...thnx guys....im falling off...

brodch01
01-28-2005, 01:46 AM
good read, maybe too many modifiers and adjectives at certain points... not your best but its good to see you drop something...

~BLUEPRINT~
01-28-2005, 08:28 AM
well this piece is kinda old...bout 2 years old....but I thought Id share it.....this was actually in the Washington Post in the Poets Corner of the Weekend section when I first wrote it.....but thanks anyway!

aplus
01-28-2005, 08:43 AM
I like this one, print, I think i had told u that before - the play between the music, corporate America, and the poor man is nice to me.

Don Savant
01-28-2005, 09:51 AM
decent piece........enough said.....