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~BLUEPRINT~
01-12-2005, 12:05 AM
http://slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=153232

A friend of mine asked me to write a poem for her basically summing up how our relationship as friends is....so I wrote this on the spot in about 15 mins....tell me what yall think


A commendable friendship,
that trails amongst the borders of an affair,
but composure keeps us within the constraints
of friendly conversation,
toying with the notion of a revival
of our younger love's memoirs.

We have distanced,
and have become companions
of frequent hello's and goodbye's,
but never once seriously shadowed
the chance of rebirthing a relationship,
that we still retain fond remeberance of,
and still speak of folded letters with faded scribblings
of our initials confined inside a red heart.

We remain content,
and friends thru an every once in a while contact,
but age has concieved a mutual maturity among us,
so we are able to share life's scars
and confessions with an open mind,
without the risk of hurt feelings.

Treading thin lines between what friends do
and what couples do,
We realize that nothing can exceed
the limitations of intercourse,
yet walk the fine path of intimacy,
but remain mere sexual counterparts,
and still have the audacity to consider each other,
as the best of friends.

Don Savant
01-12-2005, 12:15 AM
shoot i need me one of them....

skeet skeet skeet skeet skeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

ahhhhh, whew

Don Savant
01-12-2005, 12:16 AM
ok, ok..decent poem fella...left a word out right here

"so we able to share life's scars"

you painted her a very vivid picture of how you felt and i hope she could see and appreciate it...kudos for sharing....

ejp305
01-12-2005, 06:52 AM
FIRE i tell you . you are a man amongst boys in this poetry section

~BLUEPRINT~
01-12-2005, 10:11 AM
Thnx Man....

aplus
01-12-2005, 11:11 AM
nice drop blueprint. very sincere sh*t.

savant u r a fool for that "skeet, skeet" comment.

brodch01
01-12-2005, 03:49 PM
not one of your best poems in structural terms, but you wrote it quickly... on the other hand the substance speaks to something very difficult to put into words that we all have to deal with at some point or another, which i liked alot...

SuNsHiNe_BLuE
01-12-2005, 04:54 PM
this was hot...the feeling is deep & meaningful...9/10

~BLUEPRINT~
01-13-2005, 04:20 PM
thnx for the f/b....upp!