Runaway...

[~BLUEPRINT~]

I remember when it left me...
so abrupt, no goodbye....
just a trail of slight remembrance...
straining for a glimpse....
or better yet a mere hint
of what it was
so that I may try to reconnect...
somehow, someway
thru this mental telepathy
that has yet to fail me,
just runaway temporarily
until I need it bad enough,
then it reappears like a long lost love,
at my minds doorstep
with open arms,
awaiting
as if it is saying
take me I am here.
I embrace it,
and it takes me on a journey,
that speaks of unimaginable truths
we call reality,
and remorseful tragedies,
we call drama,
and I reiterate them through
these soulful incorporations,
yielded by this reunion,
that many take for granted,
yet I bleed my experiences,
my innermost secrets and dreams,
unto a dry scale of lines
hoping that one will discover me
like an ancient ruin,
as my escaped thoughts have returned...
or revisited the sanctual dwelling in my head.....

[shebz]

I like it's chilled pace... a serene yet poignant drop... nice...

[~BLUEPRINT~]

thanks alot fam....im beginging to look for more and more of your work....

[SuNsHiNe_BLuE]

this is hot...not as wordy as you usually get, but i like the concept & the simplicity of it...9.5/10

[diamond diva]

hey blue i feel anything u write i give u a 9/10

[~BLUEPRINT~]

uppity....

[Don Savant]

i-ight man..here i am.....ay this is hot.....i'm feelin this....lovin the direction of the whole piece..the concept, the wording. it all fits nicely and paints a nice picture.....yeah...this is good..

[aplus]

yeah, this is different from your usual wordplay, but still pretty hot

this has a lot of substance to it, blue...I like it...