some different ish

[SuNsHiNe_BLuE]

i took respite from you
notebook
because i had nothing left
to give to you
the truth was worn out
as an old cloth withers away
so did the imagery

i vacationed in the
recesses of my mind
looking for refuge from
drama and crippling realizations
that my truth was
no truer than
the next man's lies

and so your pages remained
bare of any worth because
i was too selfish to
share with you
'looking out for number one'
so to speak

but how to make apologies to
an inanimate object?
the theft of your best friend
the pen
seemed well worth the cost
considering the bargain of sanity

my hope lies now in the
lines of your pages, notebook
i pray my ink doesn't run too thin
to converge on you

[SuNsHiNe_BLuE]

uppin...damn could a sista get some luv?

[aplus]

nice drop...this seemed a little different from your usual, the words were more complex, but I liked it...

"looking for refuge from
drama and crippling realizations
that my truth was
no truer than
the next man's lies"

Real talk^^^^^^best line in this poem, imo

[~BLUEPRINT~]

hard read....i found it difficult to interpret each line's underlying meaning....but the concept of the poem was hot....i love writing about the various dimensions of poetry and almost giving life to "inanimate" objects.....but you right this was a lil unorthodox from your typical poem but it was an ok read......not one of your best....i think if you reworked some of the language a little this would be another ayo classic....7/10

[SuNsHiNe_BLuE]

up...

[shebz]

im feeling this... probably cus its how im feelin right now... havent visited the notebook in a minute... think imma dig it up now...

[Don Savant]

wonderful concept......