Junkie Logic

[aplus]

http://slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=128523


Something I am workin on - as always, criticize or compliment, let me know what I can do to make this better. I know this one is short, but I think I make my point....Holla...



Junkie Logic

they spent hours together
sealed inside a short stay hotel room
watching each other shoot up drugs
a brutal process consisting of
stabbing reluctant vessels,
leaking blood,
itching skin that is inordinately scratchy,
and reciting countless expletives before
locating good veins and becoming
simultaneously sedated and charged.
it’s the kind of shared experience
that makes two strangers
practically best friends.

[LordMason DaRula]

good concept but it is too short you need to go on some more with this one but other wise you were going in a good direction

[~BLUEPRINT~]

yea plus, i think you should make it a lil longer, i was mad it was so short because it grabbed me and just held me ya know, I wanted it to grab me and then shake the sh*t out of me....ya feel me....but this has the potential to be another aplus classic