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aplus
12-07-2004, 07:35 AM
http://slumz.boxden.com/showthread.php?t=124081

Something new I am working on
As always, criticize or compliment...1


Unwanted

Every morning
for the past week
she vomits in the alley
on the way to school.

First dizziness,
then tidal waves
of saliva and bile
splashing beside her Nikes.

Lies consume her appetite,
so she embraces starvation.
At dinner,
she fakes satisfaction,
ignoring the bowl within
begging to be filled.

The next day,
she smiles while friends
compliment her tiny figure.
Girl, you look so cute; have you lost weight?

But something else is growing,
created by acts that were consensual,
but careless.

She runs home
before parental guidance returns,
rubs the famished semblance
of her teenage womb,
and flings her body
down a flight of stairs.

Once the tumbling ends,
she asks God to murder new life,
praying for blood,
waiting for an outpouring
of what she has defined as
unwanted.

Iceman46ct
12-07-2004, 07:47 AM
That was a tight piece... props

~BLUEPRINT~
12-07-2004, 11:25 AM
COTDAMN! THAT WAS WAS PURE fu*kING HEAT PLUS!!! That is in my top 10 favorite poems of yours....o wait...every one of your poems is tied for first....dah well...you get the point

Def Poet
12-07-2004, 12:04 PM
man plus that was a nice piece, truly great, props man

hiphophoney
12-07-2004, 03:28 PM
props likin the flow of it

Lies consume her appetite,
so she embraces starvation.

nice

props given

brodch01
12-07-2004, 05:33 PM
real vivid ... nice with it...

Feezy2004
12-07-2004, 10:27 PM
wow, at first i thought this piece was about a woman with bulemia but it like how you made it suspenseful til the end, i would like to read a lot more from you, what happened to ayo_cutie, she had some really good material, you guys are really talente here

TaXeS
12-07-2004, 10:42 PM
wow...dat sounds real...