no title...iono sum sh*t i wrote on life

[iLL NiCCa]

its like u eva sit on a porch an see a leaf blowin in the wind
an be like if even that moves y life feels like it takes so much to win
its like niggas all wanna be dat hot all wanna be wut dey not
ok sure yall hood you roll wit two glocks like tupac
nigga please all the talk i hear of keepin it real
wit all these niggas falsifyin life imaginin deals
niggas roll in an out of liquor stores openin bottles
or base they life expectancy on scratchin the lotto
instead i think niggas need to hope for a motto
like motivate dem selves to put down da blunt
for like 2 seconds try an pay all ur bills for da month
if u livin at home u need to remember ur earth
bless her for her blessins since the day of ur birth
if u got dat baby moms dont be treatin her ill
scoop up your seed look in its eyes cuz bein a parents a skill
dat too many niggas front on so too many shorties run on
to school jus to front on how not to write a run on
sentence maybe wit a little incentive we can try an
find some meanin to life an its lessons


na mean a little sumthin...1

[brodch01]

xactly

[aplus]

its not that bad, you had some real talk in there, but some of the rhymes were forced or were a stretch...keep postin though, I like the style...

[Iceman46ct]

Feelin the realness effect the piece had to it. Spoke on real life life issues that truly need to be looked at